the new shade cloth out side rm 8 & 6 it will be a great asset for the kids of rm 8 & 6 have fun!!!!
by Daniel b
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Hi Daniel I think that the new shade cloth will look great outside Room 7 and 8 and also there will be anew one outside room 9 and 10. What colour do you think they will be?
I would like you to go back and read your original post. Are the capital letters and full stops in the right place? Does what you have written make sense?
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Hope that you had a good holiday and that you are ready for lots of interesting learning this term.
A very short, yet descriptive post Daniel! I'm glad you now have a shade cloth - what colour did it turn out to be? Green? You can go and read my blog "Just for Fun" if you like and let me know!! =D
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Hi Daniel
I think that the new shade cloth will look great outside Room 7 and 8 and also there will be anew one outside room 9 and 10. What colour do you think they will be?
I would like you to go back and read your original post. Are the capital letters and full stops in the right place?
Does what you have written make sense?
Remember that anyone with access to the internet can read your blog. Do you think that correct spelling, grammar and punctuation are importance for such a wide audience?
Hope that you had a good holiday and that you are ready for lots of interesting learning this term.
From Mrs G
A very short, yet descriptive post Daniel! I'm glad you now have a shade cloth - what colour did it turn out to be? Green? You can go and read my blog "Just for Fun" if you like and let me know!! =D
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