I think that this poerson has written a really effective poem. The last line of this poem
And nobody is around to hear me
makes me realise just how lonely and scary life on the battle field must have been. Congratulations, the words you have used convey feeling and bring your poem to life. well done
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I think that this poerson has written a really effective poem. The last line of this poem
And nobody is around to hear me
makes me realise just how lonely and scary life on the battle field must have been.
Congratulations, the words you have used convey feeling and bring your poem to life.
well done
Mrs G
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