Thursday, October 12, 2006

The Sea

Thrilling waves to ride
Huge big tides rolling up to shore
Everlasting waves from way out at sea

Shimmering water
Enormous banks of sand
Amazing divers risking their lives


By Phoebe

5 comments:

Room10 Brightwater School said...

This is an awesome poem. I must come through and read some of your class work

Anonymous said...

that is an awesome poem phoebe

Anonymous said...

That is a good peom aboutthe sea

Anonymous said...

good poem

Anonymous said...

Awesome poem! You are very talented.